2014年英語一小作文

英語作文來源：中公考研 2016-04-13　

Directions：Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

You should include the details you think necessary.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

首先，各位同學需要根據之前講過的方法，審出四點關鍵信息。①應用文的類型(題干中的關鍵字“letter”就告訴了各位考生應用文的類型是書信);②書信的類型(大綱中規定的書信類型總共12種，但是根據關鍵詞“suggesting”就可以判斷此篇為建議信); ③稱呼語(這封信是寫給“the president of your university”，“president”是對方的一種職位，所以稱呼語為“Dear President” ;④寫作背景(……how to improve students’ physical condition，如何提高學生的身體素質)。因此，我們可以根據這四點關鍵信息來組織我們這篇文章：

Dear President,

I am the chairman of the Students Union and always keep a watchful eye on our students’ physical condition. Generally speaking, the activities and courses that you provide to help strengthen the students’ health are pretty good. While, there are some better suggestions for you to further improve our physical condition.

First of all, I would be very grateful if you could introduce more sports facilities for our students exercising, because exercising is the most effective way to keep healthy and energetic. What’s more, the food that the refectory prepares for us is of great importance to our physical condition. So it is advisable for the refectory to buy fresher vegetables.

It would be greatly appreciated if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

現在，我們總結一下這篇文章的思路及其語言。其思路如下：第一段，自我介紹，表明相關，表揚在先，提出建議;第二段，具體建議，附加原因(建議和原因都可以從自己的日常生活的角度思考);第三段，表明期待。

在語言上，各位考生可以借鑒的如下：自我介紹的句型“ I am ……”表明相關的句型可以用“and”并列結構“and always keep a watchful eye on ……”;表達表揚的句型“Generally speaking， …… are/is pretty good”;表明建議的句型可以使用“First of all, I would be very grateful if you could ……”或者“So it is advisable for sb to ……”表明期待的句型“It would be very appreciated if you could take my …… into consideration.”;

在接下來的時間里，各位同學要注意細節，比如，書寫的字跡，書信的格式，書信的稱呼以及文章組織的邏輯性等。其次，各位同學也要多總結一下小作文的思路以及應試的關鍵句型。希望各位考生可以發揮出最高水平。

預祝各位考生復習順利，考研成功!

(本文作者為輔導名師——陳文倩)