我們簡單來看看如何審這兩副圖,左邊的圖片中,一個學生坐在躺椅里悠哉悠哉,看著自己有許多書卻沒說讀上哪怕一本;右邊的圖片中,一位勤奮的學生拿著一本書仔細讀著,并且很現實地計劃著一年爭取讀完20本書。圖表描述參考如下:What is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy , lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and says, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.
第二段可以從兩方面來論證,一方面強調如果只有想法而不行動是不利于理想的實現,另一方面從正面論證腳踏實地一步一步完成理想的道理。參考如下:The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders。.
第三段給出結論,簡單提兩條建議即可。比如:Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end,you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.