2013年英語(yǔ)二大作文解析：語(yǔ)句精彩者得高分

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1月5日下午，考研英語(yǔ)考試如期進(jìn)行，寫(xiě)作Part B部分，可能是考生和各位輔導(dǎo)老師討論最熱烈的部分。英語(yǔ)（二）的圖畫(huà)寫(xiě)作，較往年試題相比簡(jiǎn)單了很多，這種作文似乎更像是四六級(jí)話題作文，所以同學(xué)們寫(xiě)起來(lái)肯定有話可說(shuō)，甚至是腦子里有很多相關(guān)的資料，可以信手拈來(lái)，只不過(guò)做個(gè)對(duì)比，看哪個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)更兩點(diǎn)更精彩就選擇哪句話。

大家也要謹(jǐn)慎一些如果只是機(jī)械性的將四、六級(jí)腦海中殘存的一些內(nèi)容搬過(guò)來(lái)，也只能得到一半左右的分?jǐn)?shù)。要注意審題，題目中圖片的大概意思是：大學(xué)生從大一到大三從事兼職的人數(shù)呈現(xiàn)緩慢增長(zhǎng)的趨勢(shì)，而大四階段卻急速增長(zhǎng)。第二段應(yīng)該透過(guò)現(xiàn)象解釋原因，至少分兩方面：第一，為何大一到大三從事兼職的人數(shù)緩慢增長(zhǎng)；第二，為何大四從事兼職學(xué)生的數(shù)量激增。最后一段分析這種現(xiàn)象是否符合客觀規(guī)律。
 
范文：
In the bar chart, it shows the changes of the proportion of the students having part-time jobs during the four years’ study in college. The proportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however, the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase, surging to 88.24%.
There is no denying that this trend is very pervasive in current colleges and in a certain degree is quite proper. To begin with, when students in their first year in college, their major job is to study, not to work. They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that they make a good preparation for future work. What’s more, when students are going to step out of school and enter into the society, they have to know lots of experience , for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they need to have some part-time jobs. Clearly, doing a part time job has many advantages. Students can learn how to get along well with others and know the society more profoundly. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice. Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload their families’financial burden.
Due to the analysis above, to be an eligible heir of socialism construction, you have to strike a balance between your study and the job. Study is your major task while a part time job is a minor one though work experience is desirable.